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01-07-2011, 10:49 PM | رقم المشاركة : ( 1 ) | ||
طالب مثالي
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When i die
When I die
when my coffin is being taken out you must never think i am missing this world don't shed any tears don't lament or feel sorry i'm not falling into a monster's abyss when you see my corpse is being carried don't cry for my leaving i'm not leaving i'm arriving at eternal love when you leave me in the grave don't say goodbye remember a grave is only a curtain for the paradise behind you'll only see me descending into a grave now watch me rise how can there be an end when the sun sets or the moon goes down it looks like the end it seems like a sunset but in reality it is a dawn when the grave locks you up that is when your soul is freed have you ever seen a seed fallen to earth not rise with a new life why should you doubt the rise of a seed named human have you ever seen a bucket lowered into a well coming back empty why lament for a soul when it can come back like yusif from the well when for the last time you close your mouth your words and soul will belong to the world of no place no time ..................................... HOPE U LIKE IT |
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02-07-2011, 01:14 AM | رقم المشاركة : ( 2 ) | ||
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what to say
I am really impressed and i have goose bump when i was reading I noticed that this time it came without a certain rythem but still i like it very much ,, you are a perfect poet |
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02-07-2011, 09:38 AM | رقم المشاركة : ( 3 ) | |
طالب مجتهد
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Super like !
3> !!! |
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02-07-2011, 01:12 PM | رقم المشاركة : ( 4 ) | |||
طالب مثالي
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اقتباس:
thannx .... it`s appreciated |
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03-07-2011, 04:19 PM | رقم المشاركة : ( 5 ) | |
طالب متألق
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I liked this poem
Thank you very much |
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03-07-2011, 04:48 PM | رقم المشاركة : ( 6 ) | ||
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