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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : One of my English poems-_-


BaStaKia
27-06-2009, 12:55 AM
My…. Story

The beginning was talking about a site
Then we were joking, laughing and sometimes we fight
But when we fight with indirect way we say sorry
Until now I think it could be a lovely story
But not really this story is going to have a sad end
Thoughts which I was thinking about is just a friend
But I noticed that I was wrong
So I had to say the truth which needed me to be strong
Tried to say the truth, tried to be honest
But I couldn’t say it and you imagine that I’m your countess
My heart is broken because our story was our mistake
You said we should think one night, we should take a break
I want to dry your tears but would you dry my tears
I’m sorry, I should deal with that, I should face my fears
Who can help me a brave knight on the dark night
No my God only can help me and lead me to the light
This situation taught me a lesson which says
Going on something fictive leads to bad ways
I’m a poetess and this way I feel
When I’m broken like I’m a car without a wheal
Do you remember when I said that you are a hero?
I still think that you are but your level is not zero
You’ve asked me how I could write
Because I can’t tell anyone about it so I have to write
It’s hard to end this poem; it’s a big moment on my life
This is tough what to do; I kill myself with a knife
No, it’s not a solution. Is there another one?
Yes, forget me and I will forget you, enjoy and have fun
All what I have to say good luck
Forget me and don’t try to be back..

Notice: Never think about people bad.. you could understand me wrong but .. at the end nobody would understand what the poetess feel only if she was the one I mean and the one I wrote that for her..

نسمة الربيع
27-06-2009, 01:07 AM
loved what you have written

:smailes41: it makes me wanna cry ..!!

cuz .. I've been through a situation like that 1 .. with my best friend !!

I want to dry your tears but would you dry my tears
I’m sorry, I should deal with that, I should face my fears
Who can help me a brave knight on the dark night
No my God only can help me and lead me to the light

This part is gr8

but the end was the best


All the best

BaStaKia
27-06-2009, 01:11 AM
loved what you have written

:smailes41: it makes me wanna cry ..!!

cuz .. I've been through a situation like that 1 .. with my best friend
thanks God ..
you didn't understand me wrong
..

All the best
thanks for your comment and don't worry about
THE BEST

BaStaKia
27-06-2009, 01:26 AM
امم يا جماعة ... من شاطر في تعبير العربي ..
إذا في أحد وده يترجمها عشان تحلو في عيون الأعضاء ..
ايكون سوو خير ..<< تذكرت لامارتين وعلي محمود طه >> ههه

موريانتس بطل
11-08-2009, 05:21 AM
مــــا شــاء الله ..

ما أدي ويش أقول ..

بس إبــداع صـــراحة ..

شكلها الإنجليزي بالنسبة ليش مثل العربي ؟؟!!!

BaStaKia
12-08-2009, 12:37 AM
^^ لا العربي مأساه .. هههههههههههه:1515: